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*Summon Note.

Note contents: […In case anything else happens. Hopefully you’ll never need this.]

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First impression: I have to admit, the background it amazing. It drew me in right away, and made me want to check it more. The colors are an interesting mix, dark but not too dark, with the hints of light in it. Good job for first impression.

Theme: Hmm, this is a tough one. I don’t think I’ve ever seen this one used for the main RP theme. I like the way it looks. But on the side bar, it looks like information is cut off, making me not like it so much. If it is possible to fix, please do. That is the only thing I can find fault with.

Plot: The Mini-plot is good. However, the main plot, is a little on the long side. Then length of it, honestly had me starting to feel a little confused by the time I finished it. Part of it is having what category a character can belong to as part of the plot page. I think another page, called species or something similar, should be made. That is merely a suggestion.

Characters: While you said the bios were just the “bare bones” of the characters. I have to disagree. They aren’t long, but long bios aren’t always the best. I got a good feel for a lot of the characters from just reading the bio. While they are on the shorter side, they contain a good amount of information on the character.

Faces: This was interesting to see. I liked the mix of faces I saw. I rarely see Kelly Clarkson or Carrie Underwood as FC’s. I think they are great ones to use though. I didn’t see any of the really over used faces, and that was nice.

Side blogs: N/A

Audition form: It is the bare basic for an audition form. There is nothing wrong with that. Personally I like to know how many other RP’s a person is in, and how active they plan on being. The OC form however is extremely well thought out, and to me, is above average.  

Graphics: Can I gush for a second? Because I absolutely love the graphic used for the background, as well as the way each character has different wings depending on what they are. It is clean and appealing to the eyes.

Admins: I wish I knew more about the admins so that I could say something. But the Admin page in the navigation section is bare. But as far as I can tell they seem to be mature and doing a good job. I don’t see any of the things that admins do that bother both me and Shay.

Over all: Overall it seems like a great RP. It is well thought out and only needs a few things to be tweaked to be better than it is.

  Serenity Chase | 16 | Second Year | FC: Selena Gomez  | OPEN Power: Light Manipulation Bio: Despite Serenity's odd name, she never saw herself as a odd or different child. And she wasn't. Unless you count her angelic nature.Serenity lived a charmed life, living with her parents in a large manor house in Winchester, England. She was always in touch with nature and never harm another living creature. Her childhood was uneventful, she even missed her power manifesting. But it was like nothing had changed except an odd angelic glow around her body. It only became noticable something changed when on the morning of her 16th birthday she received her first car. She was so happy that her body produced a blinding amount of light, temporarilly blinding anyone in the vecinity. From then her power became quite tempermental, brightening and dulling at random. Her parents then sent her to St. Valentine's to help her.Senerity is a quiet soul, watching out for everyone and being caring and gentle. She's quite shy but polite. This can be an excuse for people to abuse her kindness.

Relations:

 Samantha Avery- Best friend- Her and Samantha clicked the first time they met, she thinks of Samantha as some sort of younger sister, always ready to give advice and help, and knows she can expect the same in return.